I really don't see it? apathy isn't really Zevi-like.Marri wrote:Thanks :) Anything in particular you'd like to know about Alli? I have been known to describe her as "an apathetic and less violent type of Zevi".
It isn't something I would like to know, but she comes off as a sort of a red herring for the love triangle that you wanted? like the reader knows that Emma and Phil are part of it, but doesn't know who is the "mysterious third girl" and the prime suspect is Alli..?
Do you have any plans/desires for how the magic could influence the story?Marri wrote:I have indeed considered that! I'm just not very good at it, since I'm rather fond of them and also that sort of requires me to have a plot that does so xD But generally not opposed.
Maybe someone at the college discovered a new/interesting use of magic that could be profitable and our heroes get involved in it?