Short Story: "Will"
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Short Story: "Will"
Will. Science fiction. < 2,300 words.
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Relatable! (Also, eee.)
I like the personal aesthetic of "well, there are these sleeping princesses, see, so obviously I'm going to rescue one by fulfilling some impossible tasks." It says fun things about a character.
I like the personal aesthetic of "well, there are these sleeping princesses, see, so obviously I'm going to rescue one by fulfilling some impossible tasks." It says fun things about a character.
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Is “sleeping maiden” the common term or just Tarinda’s, and if it’s common what are some equivalents for other genders?
That is quite a lot of effort to rescue somebody who didn’t particularly want it. Most of those problems that she solved with money are things that would cost a lot in any era because they involve genuinely scarce resources.
I like the buying-a-miracle system.
However, despite all that my immediate reaction when finishing was “where can I get a ceiling screen over my bed?”.
That is quite a lot of effort to rescue somebody who didn’t particularly want it. Most of those problems that she solved with money are things that would cost a lot in any era because they involve genuinely scarce resources.
I like the buying-a-miracle system.
However, despite all that my immediate reaction when finishing was “where can I get a ceiling screen over my bed?”.
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It amuses Tarinda to call Cory a "sleeping maiden" and people know what she's talking about but there are other terms.
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This is so great *_*
Sorry for my bad english
"Yambe Akka take the stars, they’re zombies!" - Isabella Amariah
"Yambe Akka take the stars, they’re zombies!" - Isabella Amariah
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I like!
I'm not sure what the insurance salesperson was doing unless she was the ex, but there's no clues pointing at that being the case that I noticed.
I wonder who evaluates whether the conditions have been met. Does The Singleton do that kind of thing?
I'm not sure what the insurance salesperson was doing unless she was the ex, but there's no clues pointing at that being the case that I noticed.
I wonder who evaluates whether the conditions have been met. Does The Singleton do that kind of thing?
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I think "knowing where you are at all times forever" is pretty good evidence that she's the ex, yeah.
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Oh, and are “sleeping maiden” and friends used specifically for people with intended-to-be-absurd conditions, for people with hard conditions, or people with any conditions at all?
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This is one of the cutest things I've read in a while.
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Ginnifer is the ex.
The Singleton will not deploy miracles that violate wills.
People with difficult conditions.
The Singleton will not deploy miracles that violate wills.
People with difficult conditions.