I don't believe the doctors because template attractors.
On a different note, what are Sunnyverse!Theos and how are they ignorant of Things?
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DanielH wrote:I don't believe the doctors because template attractors.
On a different note, what are Sunnyverse!Theos and how are they ignorant of Things?
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Your spoiler box is broken - try removing the speech marks from inside the BB-code.DanielH wrote:~snip~
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It's still not obvious to me, but it's less out-of-nowhere.pedromvilar wrote:On a somewhat related note, Throne and I rephrased a couple of things over the end of the battle and the hospital to make some things clearer; I'm still not 100% happy with the result but I think the reason why Sadde thinks Theo's acting weird might be a bit more obvious.
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Alli does not do subtlety. She thinks she does. She does not.Throne3d wrote:Response
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She won't die yet.DanielH wrote:I don't believe the doctors because template attractors.
Yeah, the thing it's supposed to be is that Theo kinda stops... really showing emotions? Any emotions. Body language stops, eyes, go dark, it all looks like an act.Ezra wrote:It's still not obvious to me, but it's less out-of-nowhere.
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:PMarri wrote:Alli does not do subtlety. She thinks she does. She does not.Throne3d wrote:~snip~
The reason behind Theo acting weirdly isn't supposed to be obvious, but it should definitely be clearer to the reader that Theo's acting weirdly.pedromvilar wrote:Yeah, the thing it's supposed to be is that Theo kinda stops... really showing emotions? Any emotions. Body language stops, eyes, go dark, it all looks like an act.Ezra wrote:It's still not obvious to me, but it's less out-of-nowhere.
Sadde's only really picking up on it because Theo's usually pretty consistent about those things (plus the fact that Sadde's good with people).
If you'd never met Theo before, and he came up to you and started interacting with you like this, you wouldn't realise that he's being weird, unless you were really good at figuring people out. He's acting mostly like a normal human being, albeit someone who's not very lively. If you've met Theo before, though, you can probably guess he's acting weirdly, and if you've met him while he's been sad before, it's very obviously not that.
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1. Thanks, Adelene. I knew spoiler boxes were finicky and when I wrote it I planned to hit preview to make sure it worked, but I forgot.
2. The changes definitely helped, but I was still not clear exactly what it was. It seemed more like he was taking charge in an emergency (where you are supposed to tell individual people what to do, like him telling Sadde to go flag down the ambulance and undo the change). He was also faking at the time in a way Sadde knew about, for the benefit of the paramedics. I would not have been as put off as Sadde was about his behavior; I would have attributed it (not quite correctly) to some combination of the two of those.
3. I am surprised about your saying “She won't die yet.”, but I’d already figured that the last word of that was important before you said it. Was Sadde just not aware enough for that to apply?
2. The changes definitely helped, but I was still not clear exactly what it was. It seemed more like he was taking charge in an emergency (where you are supposed to tell individual people what to do, like him telling Sadde to go flag down the ambulance and undo the change). He was also faking at the time in a way Sadde knew about, for the benefit of the paramedics. I would not have been as put off as Sadde was about his behavior; I would have attributed it (not quite correctly) to some combination of the two of those.
3. I am surprised about your saying “She won't die yet.”, but I’d already figured that the last word of that was important before you said it. Was Sadde just not aware enough for that to apply?
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Oh nooo, is Jackson going to magic school for an M.R.S.?"Does your dom not buy you stuff?"