Interactive Fiction in Cloudbank

[rockeye_stonetoe]

Writing glowfic in my original world of Cloudbank has inspired me to write interactive fiction about it. Currently, it's not even half of a quarter of a chapter (just character and ship creation), but I wanted to put it here and see what the forum thinks of it.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/444 ... _2015.html

Comments, concerns, criticism, yelling about how this is the wrong forum for this, will be read and understood.

[Alicorn]

Wow, I know approximately when you started this and there's a lot done considering.

[Kappa]

Huh, I bought the Stormwing but my stats told me I bought the Yellowfin.

Content-wise, I really like it so far, though!

[rockeye_stonetoe]

Fixt

[Bluelantern]

Huh, I bought the Stormwing but my stats told me I bought the Yellowfin.

Content-wise, I really like it so far, though!

Same thing here, but really liked the content too.

[Lambda]

Oooh, nifty.

[jalapeno_dude]

You do a very good imitation of the Choice of Games writing style!

I was able to spend money than I actually had on upgrades. Can post details of how I did so if that's helpful in debugging.

[rockeye_stonetoe]

It was probably inaccurate descriptions. Right now I'm focused on pounding out content, debugging can wait.

[PlainDealingVillain]

I did the same; options that cost 2 circles still show up when you have 1 circle available.

[rockeye_stonetoe]

Slightly updated