Novella: "Rings"

Plain old discussion of Alicorn stories.
User avatar
Alicorn
Site Admin
Posts: 4226
Joined: Fri Mar 21, 2014 4:44 pm
Pronouns: She/her/hers
Location: The Belltower
Contact:

Novella: "Rings"

Post by Alicorn »

...will be up tomorrow.

I'm on a plane, and it has free wifi but blocks FTP, so I can't upload the story yet. When it goes up it'll be here. Fantasy, < 18,300 words (a little shorter than Water).

If you are a Patreon patron, go check out this patrons-only post with a link to the version the beta readers got - it's a Google doc in raw HTML, so not the most pleasant reading experience ever, but it'll get you there a day early. I charged for this post on Patreon but won't be double-charging for Rings. I think this should still work if you subscribe after the fact (i.e. now) and I won't begrudge if you then back out as soon as you have the link - I would be publishing to the world today but as long as I can only do an ugly version might as well make it a perk of sorts.
Anya
Posts: 547
Joined: Sat Mar 22, 2014 1:27 pm
Pronouns: she/her/hers
Contact:

Re: Novella: "Rings"

Post by Anya »

That was great and makes me feel things. Sad things!
User avatar
Alicorn
Site Admin
Posts: 4226
Joined: Fri Mar 21, 2014 4:44 pm
Pronouns: She/her/hers
Location: The Belltower
Contact:

Re: Novella: "Rings"

Post by Alicorn »

Home! It's up normally now.
cbhacking
Posts: 150
Joined: Fri Mar 28, 2014 12:48 am
Pronouns: Masculine (or whatever)
Location: Seattle

Re: Novella: "Rings"

Post by cbhacking »

... Ooof. Dang, that hits. Such complicated feelings...

Also, your RSS feed has the right link, but shows the title "Sendaway". Copypasta?
User avatar
Alicorn
Site Admin
Posts: 4226
Joined: Fri Mar 21, 2014 4:44 pm
Pronouns: She/her/hers
Location: The Belltower
Contact:

Re: Novella: "Rings"

Post by Alicorn »

Yeah, bleagh.
User avatar
Bluelantern
Posts: 2347
Joined: Sat Mar 22, 2014 3:31 pm
Pronouns: He, Him, His
Location: http://curiosity-discoverer-of-worlds.tumblr.com/

Re: Novella: "Rings"

Post by Bluelantern »

That was great in a "completely twisted horrifying" kinda of way xD
Sorry for my bad english

"Yambe Akka take the stars, they’re zombies!" - Isabella Amariah
User avatar
jalapeno_dude
Posts: 1184
Joined: Sat Mar 22, 2014 2:57 pm
Pronouns: He

Re: Novella: "Rings"

Post by jalapeno_dude »

Well, that was horrifying.
especially this
"The royal family does not condone biological murder."
DeAnno
Posts: 84
Joined: Sun Mar 23, 2014 11:26 pm
Pronouns: He/him/his

Re: Novella: "Rings"

Post by DeAnno »

Does anyone think that maybe Shula knew Celia was on the fence and the entire thing with Meer was staged to guilt her into going along?

EDIT: Though through Celia's father we know Meer wasn't lying, so he wouldn't have been in on it and Shula would've been playing the game two steps ahead, letting him make his doomed attempt since it would let her rope in Celia with guilt.
User avatar
PlainDealingVillain
Posts: 622
Joined: Tue Apr 01, 2014 10:15 pm
Pronouns: he etc.

Re: Novella: "Rings"

Post by PlainDealingVillain »

Yeah, I also got the feeling that Shula was expecting Meer (or maybe someone else) to try to convince Celia to give it up.
User avatar
Alicorn
Site Admin
Posts: 4226
Joined: Fri Mar 21, 2014 4:44 pm
Pronouns: She/her/hers
Location: The Belltower
Contact:

Re: Novella: "Rings"

Post by Alicorn »

I can't tell if people want me to confirm or deny interpretations of events.
Post Reply