Alicornutopia

and am looking for folks who've read Luminosity, Radiance, and the Flashes, who are jonesing for more and would like to beta-test the story. Note it's not written yet (just a very rough draft of the first chapter, plus notes on the rest).

Looking for feedback on story arc, canon contradictions, timeline consistency, things like that. also, whether it's a dumb idea. not anywhere near ready for grammar, spelling, proofing etc., just really early feedback as the story itself develops.

Any takers?

In my opinion only the most egregious 'did you even read it' canon inconsistencies need to be corrected.

I will read and feedback. Get it to me however you like.

I am an unpicky beta reader, but would also read it. myusername at gmail

Rockeye: i clicked "contact" but you have no contact info.
it sounds like you feel that minor non-canonical things are okay?

Villain: sent

You can always PM it to me

I don't see how, when i click your name, the area under "Contact rockeye_stonetoe" is entirely blank

davecotter wrote:I don't see how, when i click your name, the area under "Contact rockeye_stonetoe" is entirely blank

I think you meant Private Messaging through the forum

Also, I can't really beta for you but good luck with your fanfic!

Under CONTACT ROCKEYE_STONETOE, I see one entry for “PM: Send private message”. I also see a PM button to the right of each of his posts, under the picture, the name, the post count, the join date, and the pronoun. Do you not see those? Maybe you need to have posted some threshold number of times before you can PM somebody.

DanielH wrote:Under CONTACT ROCKEYE_STONETOE, I see one entry for “PM: Send private message”. I also see a PM button to the right of each of his posts, under the picture, the name, the post count, the join date, and the pronoun. Do you not see those? Maybe you need to have posted some threshold number of times before you can PM somebody.

This sounds likely, apparently we can pm him though

And I bet he could reply if we did so.